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[Mountain Flowers - F-777]

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Dude wtf was that amazing piano arp at 1:38. Wtf were you thinking? That was AmAzInG!!!!!! I loved it!!!! I dont know if you used the Fl Arpegiator or if you did it by hand but it was amazing. and the rest of the song was good too :)

[[LK] Paradise [WiP]]

Honestness

Since i been becoming more involved in my work, i start to notice the fine details in other peoples work. So here it goes...

-Ok, the beggining is good but the kick maybe should just be a clubby kick, not and FX kick. It just sounds like to much is going on.

- The melody at 0:24 is beastly. You can take that somewhere, but to be honest i didnt like where you took it. Sorry. But i think you are trying waayyy to hard to make a melody that people will remember. If you ever heard Children by Robert Miles; you would know that a melody doesn't have to be very fast and hectic for it to be memorable.

- I do like the structure and the Percs. But overall my favorite part was the melody at 0:24.

So i hope my words have helped you. Sorry if it just sounds like im only critisizing. But idk, i must jsut be taking out my Jelousy of how good you are compared to me. But that still doesnt hide the fact that you are trying to hard. Sometimes you should just slow things down, If you haven't heard Children by Robert Miles. Its a must if you want to make a song that people will love.

:p

LK412 responds:

Ill make it an FX kick but not the same one, that one is to crazy.

I never tried to hard on it, i literally took 5 minutes in it, and i dont think its too complicated. You are right though im trying to make a catchy melody and it though this was catchy cuz i got it stuck in my head :P. I've heard of the song but never listened to it.

Thanks for the review, ill keep ur words in mind.

[[LK] Excitement [Final]]

Im diggin' it

I like that you used the Synth and that lil plucky sound together. I think that without the pluck, it would have been a boring melody. But it just brought it to life.

Also, nice use of effects. 5/5 10/10

With Gratitude, Elph

Keep up the good work.

LK412 responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[[LK] Summer]

Definatly DJ splash

Good. I have also been trying mimicing (<-- idk if thats spelled right) some artists. Such as Tiesto for my most recent song. It is actually very fun. You did a good job here :)

LK412 responds:

Thanks.

[[LK] Euphoria]

Hey its me skylence...

Dude you finished it!!! Good work man!!! Gratz on getting top 5 its doing well :) If you want i can still do that RMX for you but if not i can hold off for a while. But if your ok with it i will hope to have it done by this weekend.

~ElpH~

LK412 responds:

k cool!

Thanks for the review!

[~EnV~Come Home]

Ya i like it!

This is good work bro can you pm me and give me a little tutorial on how to slice vocals.

Thanks.